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When he cries... - Chapter 2

Feb. 19th, 2008 | 07:31 pm
location: Hinamizawa
mood: Thanks, Nee-nee... Thanks, Nee-nee...
music: Naraku no Hana - Eiko Shimamiya

  And there's When he cries... chapter 2. More blood, more sad stuff, more Higurashi songs. *sigh* Well, anyway, enjoy.

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Arc 2 : Flower of the Abyss

He was lying on his bed, his eyes empty. That dream…was it really a dream ? He can’t stop thinking of it.

Was that…really me ? I have…killed them ?

Suddenly, everything became black around him. Just like before. Was he dreaming once again ? This time, he was in his jail, smeared with blood. Probably the guards’ blood from before…

- How powerful, dear…I am impressed.
- What are you doing to do with me ?
- General Grants needs you. So I created you on his demand. And if you have lost control of yourself, you are not perfect…some experiments should be necessary…
- But…
- Shhh…now shut up, you little…
- …Gh…Gyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh !

I pushed Aurora, and, even I don’t know how, I opened the jail’s door, and ran away.

- So, you’re running away ? Then, try to escape from here…

I am so scared…I want to escape…I want to stay alive…

- Run, run, poor little thing !

Shut up…shut the hell up…Leave me alone !

I was running away. Again. I wonder why…I don’t know how, but I…can felt the pain of this child…me, right ?
I fell on the ground, tired.

- Someone…help…need help…I don’t want to return there…It’s…it’s horrible…help…HELP !

I open my eyes. But everything is black around me…Am I…dead ? No…they’ve retrieved me…

Not again…

- I told you. No one can escape from here. So, until you’re perfect…stay here, and don’t struggle. If you do, we must kill you, understood ?

I was unable to do anything, after all. The only thing I can do now, is wait.

Saa   wasuremashou sono mirai ga...Mata   chinurarete yuku nante...Namanurui kaze   toguro o maitara
Sore ga tabun   aizu...
Nukedashitette   nukedashitette...Kanashi sugiru unmei kara...Anata wa   naraku no hana ja nai...
Sonna basho de
Sakanaide   sakanaide karametorarete ikanaide...

...Oto mo naku tobikau   toki no kakera...

What is that voice ? Is someone singing ?

- Is anybody there ?
- Shhh, don’t talk. They can hear us.
- Who are you ?
- My name is Chiu…I am a replica, after all, I don’t really have a name. And you ?
- I…don’t know who I am.
- …I will call you “Onii-chan”, then.
- O…onii-chan ?
- That means “big brother”.
- Oh, I see…
- Nii-nii, what are you doing here ?
- …some…General needs me. I don’t know why.
- Mmmmmh, you’re a replica, so he needs you for replace someone.
- Replica ? But…is that person dead ?
- My original is dead. I saw her. They killed her, just like that.

So…that…Chiu, is a replica ? Just like me ?

- Oh !
- Something wrong, Chiu ?
- There’s…there’s a hole, here ! Maybe it’s on your side too !
- Yes, it is !
- Give me your hand.
- W-What ?!
- GIVE ME YOUR HAND.
- O…OK.

I passed my hand in the hole, and sense some…hot stuff, in that cold place. Chiu’s hand…

- These experiments…it’s horrible, isn’t it ? Like they kill you, again and again ?
- Huh ? How did you know ?
- They did that to a young boy…he was really, really cute, with red hair and green eyes. But he seemed so sad…
- Replicas !

That voice…it’s Aurora. What does she want ?

- General Grants is here. I command to the Duke Fabre’s son replica to come here !
- I must go…
- Be careful. Don’t struggle, Onii-chan !

I left my jail. I took a look to Chiu’s one. She had long purple hair, and blue eyes.

- Onii…chan…? Is that you…?

Chiu…she resembles Arietta…

Aurora took my arm, and pushed me in a dark room. There was…dead bodies in it.

- See, replica ? These people…you have killed them. All.
- No…no…it can’t be…
- Yes, it is. You’re a monster. Hear me ?!
- …No…ngh…Chiu…help…Gyaaaaaagh !

I took my head in my hands, and fell on the ground.

Don’t struggle, Onii-chan !

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Come, let’s forget that future, who will be smeared with blood again.
If that calm wind winds in coils…it is probably a sign.
Escape, escape, from this sorrowful fate, you are not the flower of the abyss…
In such a scary place, don’t bloom here, don’t bloom here, don’t let you get caught.
…Time shards fly without any sound…


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How was it ? Next chapter will be here...when I'll download the song "Why, why not". *---> exit*

(Read this chapter with this song : Naraku no Hana - Eiko Shimamiya http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-9V5-R5Shk)

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When he cries... - Chapter 1

Feb. 18th, 2008 | 05:55 pm
location: Hinamizawa
mood: sad sad
music: Taishou A - anNina

Welcome to my journal. I will post here some of my fan-fictions, so now, enjoy my first fic, When he cries...
WARNING ! This is really, really some sad stuff. (Aww, I knew I mustn't watch Higurashi no Naku Koro ni before writing that...)

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Arc 1: Subject A

 

Where is this place ? Let me go ! I am scared…

 

-          Hnnngh…

 

Leave me alone…help me…I’m scared…

 

-          Agh…

 

I don’t want to die…I am…so…scared…HELP ME !

 

-          Ah !

 

He awoke. That dream…again. That was the seventh time he did it. He can’t remember exactly…but he was a child.

 

-          …ouch…it hurts. At this rate, I will become mad.

-          Yoohoo, master ! Are you awake ?

-          …Jade…

-          Yes ?

-          Shut up.

-          Oh ! Goodness, what a thing to say !

-          Please, Colonel, stop this. You know that he’s not feeling well.

-          Oh, I’m sorry, Tear !

-          Colonel…

 

Suddenly, a weird sound resonated. Jade and Tear opened the door. He was here, lying on the ground.

 

-          What happened to you ? Hey! Are you awake ?

-         

-          He seems pretty weak…said Jade.

-          Jade, help me.

 

….

 

Help me…

 

-          Perfect! General Grants will be happy. Call him.

-          Understood.

 

Where am I ?

 

-          Wake up, my cute subject.

-          Hnngh…

-          Wakey wakey ?

-          …W…who are you ? And where am I ?

-          In the replica facility lab. I’m glad you’re alive.

-          A…live ?

-          Yes. You’re the only one who survived. Don’t worry. You will be safe here.

-          Miss, General Grants is here.

-          Make him enter.

 

Is this…Master Van ? Yeah, it’s him ! Master Van !

 

-          So, this is the subject ?

-          Yes, sir. The perfect Duke Fabre’s son replica !

-          Perfect, huh ?

-          Yes. What is wrong ?

-          In all ?

-          Yes.

-          Even in fight ?

-          Probably…

-          Let us test him.

-          What ? But…but he just awoke !

-          If he’s perfect, he will pass the test without any problems.

 

Master Van, what are you talking about ?

 

Master Van approches me. He had a strange smile on his face…

 

-          So, you are perfect ?

-         

-          Not much of a conversation, are you ?

-         

-          What’s wrong with him ? said Master Van at the scientist.

-          He’s probably a little scared and lost.

-          Who…are you…?

-          Finally, he talked. So…let’s test him. Let enter the Oracle Knights.

 

The Oracle Knights ?

 

-          Ambush him.

 

It can’t be…Master Van, why ?

 

The Oracle Knights charged. I was here, unable to move, unable to fight back, unable to do anything.

 

I don’t want to die…I don’t want to…DIE !

 

One of the Oracle Knights was near me. Without any command, my hand hurts him, and I took his sword. Then, I put the sword on his neck and I…killed him.

Master Van laughed.

 

-          Incredible…

-          See ? He is perfect.

-          Yes. You are right. But…I will come back tomorrow. The young Duke awaits.

-          Have a good day, sir.

 

Master Van left the room. The scientist turned back on me.

 

-          So, my perfect subject, what are we doing now ? Oh, yes, I know…Guards ! Take him away !

 

I cannot did anything. The guards bring me to a dark, dirty room. Blood…there was blood in all the room…

The scientist comes near me.

 

-          Good night. Sleep well, tomorrow is a hard day !

-          But…You said that I will…

-          Tch, tch, tch…I have never said that I will let you be free…

-          Who are you ?

-          My name is Aurora. And you, I presume, are… …Duke Fabre’s son ? Is that right ?

-          …Duke Fabre’s son ? I..don’t know if I’m his son…

-          Hahaha…my, my, don’t worry. You will know that soon. Very soon…See you.

-          But…

-          Be careful, or you will die here…

 

Aurora left my jail, leaving me alone, with only my thoughts. I was shaking.

 

I stabbed…a human ?

No…no…I do not want to….I want to stay alive…I…I don’t want to…DIE !

 

Suddenly, I became…out of control. Unable to regain my own self. I can’t really felt it, but I knew it…I have become…a weapon, without any emotions.

One of the guards tried to advertise Aurora but…

 

-          The prisoner escapes !

-          Shut…up…Shut the hell up !

-          The…..hyaaaaaaaaagh !

 

Dead. He was dead. They were all dead. I can’t believe I did that. My young body was so fearless, but I, however, was scared, like a child.

 

-          You…just…might…die…

-          My, how scared…

 

Aurora and her guards were behind me. She was laughing…

 

-          Hahahaha…my, you’re so scary. Poor lost child…

-          DIE !

-          Haha…come, then. Ambush him !

 

The guards charged. And….

 

 

I don’t want to wake up…It’s like…I experienced something scary….At this rate…

 

-          Please, wake up…

-          Nngh…w…where am I ?

-          Ah, you’re awake. I’m relieved…since you’re seem having a nightmare.

-          It’s fine. Don’t worry about me.

-          Glad to hear that…Luke…

 

Tear left the room, leaving the young Fabre alone.

 

-          Have I…really dreamt of that ? Or…was this…

        

 

 

Covering your body with soil…even if it’s forbidden.

There was something you cannot hid…in the happiness of your innocent smile.

Why do things like sins exists ? Why do things like punishments exists ?

The pure light appears at the end of the road…However, the endless and everlasting darkness too…

Every little thing looks radiant…

…And will disappear soon…

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So, how was it ? I hope you liked it ^^ (Read that fic with that song : Taishou A - anNina)

http://fr.youtube.com/watch?v=w-Xo8li6Tpk&feature=related



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